When you post remember you are posting to a world audience. You must use correct punctuation - sentences must start with capital letters and end with full stops, check your spelling and use writing language not text language. Mrs FR

Tuesday, 24 November 2015

2nd paragraph of the forgotten city

One day Terra and I decided to go and explore the city but everything changed that day. We found the nest of the Mcgoogles. They are things than the creators invented.They have a big mouth thing that squirts green goo that is like acid if it touches your skin. It can squirt this goo five metres. It is bright purple and has random hairs everywhere and makes the most horrible cry, it sounds like thousands of children screaming at once. It has deep blue eyes which if you look directly at them, look like bottomless pits of despair.

Thursday, 19 November 2015

This is a bit of writing i have been working on for a long time, i will be uploading a paragraph form the story every week from now on until we get to the end.
This story is called The Forgotten City.

 The Forgotten City

We have been chosen to be put  into this test because of our survival skills that we got tested on before we came in. Then we were put into a forgotten city with creatures beyond your imagination, they’re horrible they take people and eat them, but still life in the city goes on just like before anything happened.