The Runaway
As Katy lay crying on her bed with a pillow pressed against her head, she tried everything to block the sound of her parents fighting. All of a sudden she heard a smashing sound then a heavy thud.
Before she knew it her feet were running down the hallway then down the stairs. She reached her living room, only to find that her dad was laying unconscious on the floor with a smashed vase next to him. She looked desperately around to try and find her mum but all she found was the front door swinging open in the wind.
Had her mum really ran out on her and her father, will she even come back.
Find out in the next paragraph of The Runway...
I will post a new part of the stroy every 1-2 weeks
Posting
When you post remember you are posting to a world audience. You must use correct punctuation - sentences must start with capital letters and end with full stops, check your spelling and use writing language not text language. Mrs FR
Tuesday, 21 July 2015
Monday, 20 April 2015
School holidays
My school holidays were really fun.
In the frist week i hung out with my dad, then on Wednesday i went to a horse clinic which was really fun and i gotto ride hlrses and spend time looking after them.
the next week i spent time at a horse clinic at the same play, i was there to help. Which was fun becaudevi still learnt heaps and i found it really enjoyable.
Thursday, 12 March 2015
This is a quick write i've been working on for a couple days,
hope you like it.
As she walked through the crumbling countryside, she couldn't help but wonder what had made the once beautiful countryside into this barren desert. Her cottage once covered in wild flowers was now a skeleton of what it had been. It had missing boards and broken windows, the had been door was ripped out of one of it's hinges and was now lopsided. Half of the little cottage was now in the field next door.
She packed up the belongings that were left in the cottage, and walked away there was nothing there for her now. Her mind keep on thinking what was she going to do and where was she going to end up.
This is a quick write i've been working on for a couple days,
hope you like it.
As she walked through the crumbling countryside, she couldn't help but wonder what had made the once beautiful countryside into this barren desert. Her cottage once covered in wild flowers was now a skeleton of what it had been. It had missing boards and broken windows, the had been door was ripped out of one of it's hinges and was now lopsided. Half of the little cottage was now in the field next door.
She packed up the belongings that were left in the cottage, and walked away there was nothing there for her now. Her mind keep on thinking what was she going to do and where was she going to end up.
Monday, 2 March 2015
Gella Pass
Gella Pass
When you look above Gella Pass the sky is full of bright beautiful creatures called Raptors. They are the most terrifying sight, but they capture you with their colourful feathers of all different shades and brightness.Once a year when they all go to find a new feeding spot, the pass suddenly lights up like a firework show on Guy Fawkes.
It is the most beautiful sight one could ever see,
but it is the rarest thing to witness because of the thin air. hardly anyone can stand to be up that high for so long. So it is the fright of the most deadly animal being so close you could touch it and the thin air that makes it so breath taking.
When you look above Gella Pass the sky is full of bright beautiful creatures called Raptors. They are the most terrifying sight, but they capture you with their colourful feathers of all different shades and brightness.Once a year when they all go to find a new feeding spot, the pass suddenly lights up like a firework show on Guy Fawkes.
It is the most beautiful sight one could ever see,
but it is the rarest thing to witness because of the thin air. hardly anyone can stand to be up that high for so long. So it is the fright of the most deadly animal being so close you could touch it and the thin air that makes it so breath taking.
Tuesday, 30 September 2014
Last weekend I was in Christchurch at a st john compitions. We didn't win anything but it was an enjoyable experience.
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Wednesday, 6 August 2014
Insurgent book reveiw
My book reveiw on Insurgent
For my book report I choose to do it on Insurgent,
the second book in the Divergent trilogy.This books
genre is fiction.The author is Veronica Roth.
Tris is fighting for survival in a shattered world that is falling apart.
She has to go behind everyone's back to find out the truth about her
world,why they have been kept inside the fence for many years, and
the to help her do it.She needs the help of her true love Tobias.
One of many things I like about this book is that it has great characters
and really paints a picture of how it would feel like and look like .
I like it when it says"We walk down series of sleek corridors.
Despire the fact we climb a few flights of stairs I still feel like
I am plunging into the earth."There was nothing I didn't like about
this book and nothing to criticize.
I think the message the author was trying to get through to the reader
was that we shouldn't let other people determine who we are.We should
be who we want to be and embrace all or strength and talents.
I think this books recommended readers are anyone who enjoys reading
adventure and action books, but I wouldn't recommend this book to anyone
under 12 years old because of some of the action and descriptions.
By Abigail
For my book report I choose to do it on Insurgent,
the second book in the Divergent trilogy.This books
genre is fiction.The author is Veronica Roth.
Tris is fighting for survival in a shattered world that is falling apart.
She has to go behind everyone's back to find out the truth about her
world,why they have been kept inside the fence for many years, and
the to help her do it.She needs the help of her true love Tobias.
One of many things I like about this book is that it has great characters
and really paints a picture of how it would feel like and look like .
I like it when it says"We walk down series of sleek corridors.
Despire the fact we climb a few flights of stairs I still feel like
I am plunging into the earth."There was nothing I didn't like about
this book and nothing to criticize.
I think the message the author was trying to get through to the reader
was that we shouldn't let other people determine who we are.We should
be who we want to be and embrace all or strength and talents.
I think this books recommended readers are anyone who enjoys reading
adventure and action books, but I wouldn't recommend this book to anyone
under 12 years old because of some of the action and descriptions.
By Abigail
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