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Tuesday, 24 November 2015

2nd paragraph of the forgotten city

One day Terra and I decided to go and explore the city but everything changed that day. We found the nest of the Mcgoogles. They are things than the creators invented.They have a big mouth thing that squirts green goo that is like acid if it touches your skin. It can squirt this goo five metres. It is bright purple and has random hairs everywhere and makes the most horrible cry, it sounds like thousands of children screaming at once. It has deep blue eyes which if you look directly at them, look like bottomless pits of despair.

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