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Thursday, 12 March 2015

This is a quick write i've been working on for a couple days,
hope you like it.

As she walked through the crumbling countryside, she couldn't help but wonder what had made the once beautiful countryside into this barren desert. Her cottage once covered in wild flowers was now a skeleton of what it had been. It had missing boards and broken windows, the had been door was ripped out of one of it's hinges and was now lopsided. Half of the little cottage was now in the field next door.

She packed up the belongings that were left in the cottage, and walked away there was nothing there for her now. Her mind keep on thinking what was she going to do and where was she going to end up.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Abigail i like what you wrote keep up the good learning